Hannah's poem

I was checking out Hannah's 5th grade class blog today and her teacher requested that the students post their poems about the rain (I guess because we've had so much lately). I don't know much about poems, unless it starts with roses are red...I was very proud of Hannah's poem and wanted to share it.


The Rain

The rain came down
from up above
the roof like a river
to the winter's sun.
While the cold winter
night turned to ice.
That night with a
drip drop on the roof
the waterful came down.
As you step outside
the pounding on your head
like a cold shower
outside as cold as ice.
The heater comes on
my frozen body is melting
faster than the sun
is coming out.